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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Many thanks, Terry.<br>
<br>
I have incorporated most of your comments and closed the issue.<br>
<br>
I have not incorporated the change of<br>
"DOL is a language for distributed knowledge representation,
system specification and model-driven development across multiple
OMS, particularly OMS that have been formalized in different OMS
languages."<br>
into<br>
"DOL is a tool for managing and manipulating distributed knowledge
representations, system specifications, and model-driven
design/development artifacts among multiple OMS,
particularly...'',<br>
because, I think DOL is not a tool, but a language. Hence, also
"manipulating" does not fit.<br>
<br>
Best, Till<br>
<br>
Am 17.05.2015 um 18:35 schrieb terry.longstreth:<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Dear Till<br>
I've completed my review of Sections 1 and 4 and attached a PDF
with the pertinent annotation. <br>
I also reviewed Section 8 but found no significant editorial
issues. <br>
<br>
If you run out of time for incorporating them, none of these
would be critical to an OMG review, but we could save them for
later discussions.<br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
Terry<br>
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On 5/15/2015 5:38 PM, Till Mossakowski wrote:<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Dear Terry,<br>
<br>
many thanks indeed!<br>
I have revised the document accordingly.<br>
<br>
Best, Till<br>
<br>
Am 15.05.2015 um 07:27 schrieb terry.longstreth:<br>
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I've annotated the attached copy of the PDF (Chapter 7 only
) with several editorial comments/suggestions. I'm still
working on the other 4 sections (in the previous days
version), but since we've been over them several times, it
seemed best to tackle this one first. <br>
<br>
Terry<br>
<br>
<br>
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I just have substantially revised chapter 7. So if you plan
to read it, please download the latest version at: <br>
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All the best, <br>
Till <br>
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